i can see the pieces
though pieces they remain
yearning for whole
still
the frustration in
this brokenness is
overcome
by the beauty of each piece
and knowledge of the challenge
and promise that lies ahead
thought provoking poem!!very simple yet a lot of words together flowed into a very deep poetry.yeah that’s the fun in solving that puzzle like life on your own facing each and every challenge and problems and combining them into a wonderful life is the main meaning of life!!you combined a number of pieces into a well written and complete poem!!keep writing!!
November 27th, 2009 at 5:34 pm
thought provoking poem!!very simple yet a lot of words together flowed into a very deep poetry.yeah that’s the fun in solving that puzzle like life on your own facing each and every challenge and problems and combining them into a wonderful life is the main meaning of life!!you combined a number of pieces into a well written and complete poem!!keep writing!!